Wednesday, October 28, 2015

Links of Interest

THE FINAL BOOK POLISH:


BODY PARTS BEHAVING BADLY:


PUTTING TENSION ON EVERY PAGE:


HEROIC SELF-SACRIFICE CAN BE EVEN MORE HEARTBREAKING:


EDITING FOR EMOTION:


A BRIEF GUIDE FOR WRITERS, TALKING WITH THE FBI:


CREATING PLOT PIVOT POINTS IN YOUR STORY:


CREATING 3-D COVERS FOR FREE:


WHAT MAKES A GOOD PROTAGONIST:


GRAMMAR, GENDER PRONOUNS IN THESE DAYS OF BRUCE/CAITLYN JENNER:


HOOKING YOUR READER IN THREE STEPS:


BALANCING SHOWING VERSUS TELLING:


OPTOMIZING FACEBOOK AD COMPAIGNS:


HOW GHOSTS WORK IN DIFFERENT GENRES:


CREATING A COMPELLING NOVEL CONCEPT, PART 2:


ADDING EMOTION TO SETTINGS:



Monday, October 26, 2015

The Subplot

The main plot of the novel drives the story forward through the whole work.  Most main plots are about the main character working to achieve his goal. 

Some novels have only one plot. A simple romance's plot is boy and girl meet, one or both screws it up because of some inner flaw or weakness, but they manage to change enough to create a happily ever after.

Other novels have a major story line and minor story lines. Most often, these books mix genres like romantic suspense, or they are more complex in both subject matter and word count.

A minor story line is called a subplot. The two major types of subplot are the parallel and the independent subplot.

The parallel subplot is a smaller element of the overall plot that intersects the major plot with both its major character or characters and the events. The main plot affects the subplot, and the subplot affects the main plot.

In AVATAR, Sully's romance with Neytiri is one of the parallel subplots in the main story of Sully's learning about the planet Pandora and his decision to save it from the other humans.

His relationship with Neytiri is his personal introduction to the planet, its people, and their ways, and his emotional/romantic relationship with her teaches him the value of its people as well as giving him the original impetus to reconsider his decision to spy on the scientists and betray the locals to the corporation and its mercenaries.

In my STAR-CROSSED, Kellen's struggle against sexual slavery, his owner Cadaran, and his search for his freedom parallels Tristan and Mara's sweet relationship and their own fight for Tristan's freedom against Cadaran as the representative of the corrupt government.

A complex novel may have numerous parallel subplots. Some may be almost as complex as the main plot, and others may be short and simple pieces of the puzzle that is the story.

A simple subplot in STAR-CROSSED involves Tristan's relationship with Floppy, the intelligent alien kitty.

When Tristan lives in Mara's house, Floppy sees him as a rival for Mara's time and attention, and the housekeeper has told Floppy that Tristan with his sneaky male ways is a danger to Mara.

Floppy works to prevent a physical relationship between Mara and Tristan, and he's more than willing to kill Tristan to protect Mara.

Floppy and Tristan gradually learn to like each other when Tristan teaches Floppy to read.

After Tristan saves Mara's life at the risk to his own freedom, Floppy is totally won over to Tristan's side.

This subplot not only drives the main story forward by interfering with the romantic relationship of the hero and heroine, it also is comic or scary in contrast to the main story line's tone at that moment to add variety.

An independent subplot doesn't impact the main story. A common use of this kind of subplot is in a mystery where the main character has a home life subplot as well as trying to catch the killer in the main plot.

At its least, an independent subplot gives a fuller picture of the main character or a more complete view of the world he inhabits.

At its best, it reflects the main plot thematically or emotionally. For example, the hero must face the death of his father and their issues of abuse at the same time as he is chasing a serial killer who targets elderly men which may indicate he was abused by an older man when he was little.

The TV show, HOUSE, often used the independent subplot which involved the relationships of the hospital staff to reflect the main plot of discovering what is killing their patient.

In most episodes, House would gain a valuable clue to the illness through his interactions with another character during that subplot

The very strongest subplot, even those that aren't parallel, brings a thematic, characterization, and worldbuilding depth to the novel.

Wednesday, October 21, 2015

Links of Interest

INDIE PUBS, HOW TO FIND A COVER ARTIST:


CHARACTER ARC 101:


USING A NEW LAWYER IN YOUR FICTION:


YOUR BOOK’S JOURNEY THROUGH A TRADITIONAL PUBLISHER:


GOOGLE WINS THE SCANNING CASE AGAINST COPYRIGHT OWNERS:


READERS HATE A PROTAG WHO DOES WRONG FOR ALL THE RIGHT REASONS:


WHAT A COZY NEEDS AND DOESN’T NEED TO BE SUCCESSFUL:


UNDERSTANDING DIFFICULT CHARACTERS:


USING SNAPCHAT, PERISCOPE, AND THE LIST APP:


WRITING CRITIQUE GROUPS:


BUILDING YOUR CAREER:


LINKS ON OUTLINING A NOVEL:


A CHARACTER SHOT WITH A CROSSBOW, FORENSICALLY SPEAKING:


LOTS O’ LINKS TO ADVICE ON WRITING A NOVEL:


FIXING A NOVEL THAT LACKS SUBSTANCE:


CREATING A SMART CHARACTER:


FOUR WAYS TO AVOID FLOATING HEAD SYNDROME:


PLANNING YOUR NOVEL’S MIDDLE:


RESEARCHING A NOVEL:





Monday, October 19, 2015

Hot, Warm, and Cold Viewpoint

QUESTION: What exactly is hot viewpoint? How is it different from other types of viewpoint?

Hot viewpoint is about the viewpoint character's emotional reaction to what is happening. Hot viewpoint is full of sensual details, strong emotions, and important/dangerous/violent actions. Most hot viewpoint moments are action scenes full of adrenaline, love scenes, or physical or emotional fight scenes which can include an argument between characters.  

Cold viewpoint has almost no emotion involved. It’s a simple recital of facts or what’s happening.

Warm viewpoint is halfway between them with emotions of importance, but not extreme importance.

Examples:

COLD: Pamela glanced at the doors' numbers as she passed them. Room 82 should be just ahead.

WARM: Pamela smiled as she glanced at the hotel room number.  Tom said he's be in in Room 82.  He'd promised her champagne, roses, and a night of passion.  A night to remember.  She could hardly wait.

HOT:  The slight cheesy stench of the alien made Pamela's nose twitch as she leaned against the hallway wall.  Her hands were sweating so much she feared she'd drop the Colt she held in her right hand.  With a quick prayer for courage, she eased toward Room 82 and kicked in the door.


For a writer, it's not so important to know the difference in an intellectual way, but to understand it instinctively as we write.  If we are inside the character and feel what she feels, we are more likely to get it right.

Wednesday, October 14, 2015

Links of Interest

MAKING POV PERSONAL:


THE PLOT SUMMARY FOR A QUERY:


CONTRACTS, THE GRANT OF RIGHTS IN A SHORT STORY ANTHOLOGY:


BOOK PROMO NEEDS LEAD TIME:


ADDING A NEW TWIST TO AN OLD PLOT:


CAN’T FINISH WRITING THAT BOOK?  HERE’S WHY:


AN INTROVERT’S GUIDE TO CONFERENCES:


ON WRITING OUTLINES:


STAGE DIRECTIONS FOR FICTION:


PUTTING YOUR DIALOGUE IN A PLACE AND PERSON:


PLANNING YOUR NOVEL’S BEGINNING:


NICHE MARKETING, PART 2:


REVISION:


AVOIDING OVER-DRAMATIZING:


WRITING DESCRIPTION IN FIRST PERSON:


WHEN DO YOU STOP REVISING?


HOW TO GET YOUR BOOK PUBLISHED TRADITIONALLY (BIG PUBLISHERS):


MARKETS, SCIENCE FICTION ROMANCE SHORT STORY ANTHO:


USING TWITTER TO INCREASE BLOG TRAFFIC:



Monday, October 12, 2015

Maintaining Tone

QUESTION: I have very abbreviated writing time so I can only work in spurts so my mood comes into the text sometimes. How can I stop that? 

The trick to holding the tone of the scene is to remember that you are the viewpoint character. You are seeing what she sees and feeling what she feels. Writing character is like immersion or method acting where you become the character.

This takes a bit of practice, but after a bit, you can switch between characters and personalities with ease as you change POV for a scene, and you can also inhabit the other characters in the scene so they continue to act as you've conceived them, and their dialogue is in character.

You also have to remember that your character should be reacting to what is happening at that moment rather than constantly sliding into introspection about the rest of her life. If you and she remains in the moment of the scene, neither of you will lose the right voice or tone of the scene.

Wednesday, October 7, 2015

Links of Interest

ARE YOU STARTING YOUR STORY TOO SOON?


IS YOUR STORY COMPLEX (GOOD) OR OVER-COMPLICATED (BAD):


MAKING CHARACTER TRAITS PART OF THE PLOT:


FIVE THINGS TO DO BEFORE HIRING AN EDITOR:


WHAT YOUR INDIE DISTRIBUTING PLAN, PART 2:


SIX COMMON MARKETING MISTAKES OF WRITERS:


GETTING SELF-PUB BOOKS INTO LIBRARIES:


BOX SETS OF BOOKS BY INDIE AUTHORS, HOW TO AND WHY:


HOW TO USE DIALOGUE TAGS:


REVISION, FINDING YOUR OWN ANSWERS:


NANOWRITE PREP, PLANNING YOUR NOVEL:


TIPS FOR CREATING A STRONG PROTAGONIST:


THE CURRENT AUTHOR BUSINESS MODEL:


PINTEREST FOR MARKETING:


CONTEST WITH WINNER GETTING PROFESSIONAL CRITIQUE, THE WORST STORYLINE EVER:


PREPARING FOR NANOWRITE:


A MONTH LONG PLAN FOR IMPROVING YOUR PLATFORM, PART 1.  (I WON’T POST LINKS TO ANY OF THE OTHER ARTICLES.):


INTERESTING WRITING TIPS:


SHOULD YOU DESCRIBE WHAT THE CHARACTER IS WEARING?


CREATING GREAT PLOTS THROUGH SCENES:


BEFORE YOU LAUNCH YOUR WEBSITE, THINGS TO KNOW:


WHY UNDERSTANDING POINT OF VIEW IS ESSENTIAL:


CREATING A WRITER FRIENDLY WEBSITE:


THE TRUE ROLE OF THE PROTAGONIST AND ANTAGONIST: